Realise - My Creative Writing

My creative story I wrote below was something I'd been thinking of last night as I fell asleep. It calmed me.

She watched as the clouds drifted across the sky. She acknowledged every shape, size, curve and blemish. They slowly made their way towards the horizon, like a businessman coming home from a long day at work. She noticed a pink and yellow tint had been added to the sky's colours. She saw the tip of the sun peeking out, slowly disappearing from her view, the rays beaming ever so slightly. As the city awaited slumber, the sun fell asleep, the clouds disappeared, and the moon and stars awoke. She felt the cool breeze twirl around her body as she laid there in peace, succumbing to the night. She looked closer at all of the shining pecks scattered across the sky. She saw the moon, a slice of light in the darkness that surrounded it.