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Tuesday, 5 June 2018

100 Word Challenge - Part Two



For English, we've been doing 100-word challenges. You either have to include different language features or -like we've just done- include words given to us by our teacher.

My challenge is down below, the words I included was magnetic, guilt, exclude, cute and daughter.


I used to feel like there was a magnetic pull on me. A strong force pulling at my feet, dragging me into trouble. I felt the need to exclude others to feel better about myself. I have no idea why, but I did. I felt the guilt, I did, I really did and it felt horrible but I still did it. It wasn’t cute, not at all. No one thought so. But my daughter helped me to recognize that it’s wrong. I love her for that. You should include others, and make people feel good about themselves. Because I did.

(This story is made up and in no way have I done something like that to someone)

If you have any feedback or ways I could improve my work -on other posts as well- comment your opinion below and I'll try my best to use your help.

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